A first-class law essay is not the one with the most cases in it. It is the one that answers the question with a clear argument. Here is the approach I teach.
1. Take the question apart
Underline the instruction word ("critically evaluate", "discuss", "to what extent") and the precise issue. Restate the question in your own words. Everything you write should answer that, and nothing else.
2. Decide your answer before you write
Markers reward a position. Write your conclusion in one sentence first, then plan each paragraph as a step towards it.
3. Put your argument in the introduction
Say what the essay argues and how it will get there. Avoid long background and dictionary definitions.
4. One point per paragraph
Open with the point, support it with authority (cases, legislation, academic commentary), explain why it matters, and link it back to the question.
5. Analyse, don’t describe
Describing what a case decided earns a pass. Explaining whether the reasoning is convincing, how it fits with other authority and what academics say about it earns the higher grades.
6. Finish properly
Conclude by answering the question directly, with no new material. Then check every footnote: accurate OSCOLA referencing is the easiest way to protect your marks.
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